Tag: sentence construction

  • Make Readers Pay Attention

    The kindergarten class in Room 9B was an odd class. The kindergarten class in 9B was odd. Which sentence is more effective? What is the most important work in the sentences? Odd. It’s an important word because it distinguishes this class from all others. The next sentence of my picture book 19 Girls and Me […]

  • 4 Worst Sentence Constructions

    When writing a novel, picture book or other story, there are sentence constructions you should avoid and revise out when you copyedit. Here’s my top 5 list of the Worst Sentence Constructions. Would Example: We would take walks daily. We would start at our house and we would go toward the lake and then we […]