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		<title>Winter Writing with Kids</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Nov 2009 11:31:35 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Darcy Pattison</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[HAPPY HOLIDAYS For the last few years, I&#8217;ve posted writing tips from Winter Holiday personalities. For example, Frosty the Snowman has 6 Top Writing Tips. This year, as our Christmas gift to you, we&#8217;ve collected these into one downloadable pdf. It&#8217;s a bit early, but teachers will be planning December and January lessons soon, and [...]<p><div id="goodreadsGiveawayWidget20260"><!-- Show static html as a placeholder in case js is not enabled -->

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		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Jun 2009 13:09:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[The Best Info About Book Trailers I&#8217;ve followed the book trailer phenomenon for a couple years and wanted to do a post. In 2003, it was just beginning; in 2006, there was lots of experimenting; in 2009, it seems here to stay and writers should take it as a given that they need a book [...]<p><div id="goodreadsGiveawayWidget20260"><!-- Show static html as a placeholder in case js is not enabled -->

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<h3>The Best Info About Book Trailers</h3>
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<h3>How To Create a Book Trailer</h3>
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<li><a href="http://booktrailermanual.com/manual">The Book Trailer Manual</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.squidoo.com/booktrailers">Book Trailers Squidoo</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.ehow.com/how_4511563_book-trailer-easy-free.html">How to Make A Book Trailer &#8212; Easy And Free</a><br />
EHow has step by step instructions for making a trailer with Powerpoint.</li>
<li><a href="http://authorculture.blogspot.com/2009/06/making-of-book-trailer-day-1.html">The Making of a Book Trailer</a>. A four-day account of an author making her own book trailer.</li>
<li><a href="http://animoto.com">Animoto.com</a>. Animates still pictures.</li>
<h3>Articles or Posts about Book Trailers</h3>
<li><a href="http://www.mediabistro.com/galleycat/book_trailer/how_will_your_book_trailer_upend_readers_expectations_124588.asp">How Will Your Book Trailer Upend Readers&#8217; Expectations?</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=94481566">In A World &#8230; Where Books Are Hyped Like Movies</a> A 9/2008 National Public Radio article, with links to the audio.</li>
<li><a href="http://booktrailers.blogspot.com/2009/03/book-trailers-that-matter.html">Book Trailers that Matter</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.camcorderinfo.com/content/Every-Book-Needs-a-YouTube-Trailer-35503.htm">Every Book Needs a You Tube Video</a> From CamCorderInfo.com. Of course, the Camcorder people would recommend book trailers; yet, the article is fairly balanced and has lots of links to new info.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.redroom.com/blog/karen-dionne/what-can-you-do-with-a-book-trailer">What Can You Do with a Book Trailer?</a> by Karen Dionne (billed as the &#8220;new Michael Crichton&#8221;) write a general article about trailers touching on where to share them and best practices.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.literanista.net/2009/06/book-trailers-coming-to-bus-and-mall.html">Book Trailers Coming to Bus and Mall</a> Billboards, buses (one company already busted!) and more links.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.electricalphabet.net/2008/05/19/book-trailers-might-be-overkill/">Book trailers might be overkill</a>. 2009 post: How do you make your video stand out? It’s about finding interesting ways to tell a story.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.findmeanauthor.com/book_trailer_videos.htm">Book Trailer Videos</a>. A general article.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.sosspotlight.com/site_creator/view/359">VIDEO BOOK TRAILERS: Coming to a Library near You</a>!<br />
When kids make book trailers they are more engaged with the story.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.examiner.com/x-15411-Baltimore-Childrens-Writing-Examiner~y2009m6d28-Book-Trailers-a-great-way-to-promote-your-childrens-book">Book Trailers, a great way to promote your children&#8217;s book</a> The downside of trailers: less imagination needed.</li>
<li><a href="http://futureperfectpublishing.com/2009/01/28/in-transit-viewing-of-book-trailers-a-potent-new-book-marketing-venue/">In-Transit Viewing of Book Trailers – A Potent New Book Marketing Venue</a>. Kids watching book trailers on the school bus.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.pw.org/content/book_trailers_key_successful_video_marketing">Book Trailers: The Key to Successful Video Marketing</a>. From Poets and Writers Magazine.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.summerreadingnys.org/teens/2009-book-trailers.html">New York Statewide Summer Reading Program</a><br />
Featured book trailers for teens from their reading program.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.pastemagazine.com/blogs/lists/2009/03/the-inelegant-art-of-the-book-trailer-seven-variat.html">A Survey of the Imperfect Art of the Book Trailer</a>. The marriage between book jacket blurb and the video &#8211; review of 7 trailers.
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<li><a href="http://www.publishersweekly.com/blog/880000288/post/1720013772.html">Trailers for Sale or Rent </a>. 2007 optimistic look at the impact of book trailers on children’s books from PW.</li>
<li><a href="http://flavorwire.com/16986/watch-before-reading-art-house-book-trailers">Watch Before Reading: Art-House Book Trailers</a>. Book trailers are interpretive, rather than plot-focused.</li>
<li><a href="http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.action?articleId=281474977019853">Promoting your novel: How to make a book trailer</a>. Author Brenda Coulter poss her experiences making a trailer for her book on Gather.com</li>
<li><a href="http://timetowrite.blogs.com/weblog/2009/04/what-makes-video-trailers-for-books-effective-5-keys.html"> What makes video trailers for books effective? (5 keys)</a> Over 1 million views of a book trailer!</li>
<h3>Ongoing Series about Book Trailers</h3>
<li><a href="http://bjanderson-write.blogspot.com/2009/06/book-trailer-tuesday.html">Book Trailer Tuesday</a>. Another regular posting on trailers.</li>
<li><a href="http://blogs.scholastic.com/kid_lit/video_trailer/">Video Wednesday</a>.Scholastic column which presents a book trailer each Wednesday.</li>
<li>Fuse #8 Productions does Video Sundays and <a href="http://publishersweekly.firstlightera.com/EN/Microsites/1/Authorbytes/AuthorsCanCreateABookTrailerHere">sometimes features Book Trailers</a>. </li>
<h3>Where to Display Book Trailers (Besides YouTube and Facebook and Good Reads)</h3>
<li><a href="http://www.book-trailers.net/2007/08/how-to-submit-book-trailer.html">BookTrailers.net</a</li>
<li><a href="http://bookscreening.com/frequently-asked-questions/">Bookscreening.com</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.comicbooktrailers.com/faq/">ComicBookTrailers.com</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.blazingtrailers.com/submit.php">Blazing Trailers</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.redroom.com/">The Red Room</a> Where the Writers Are</li>
<li><a href="http://mashable.com/2007/09/08/books-toolbox/">Books Toolbox: 50+ Sites for Book Lovers</a><br />
From Mashable, this post lists many more social media sites about books.</li>
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<h3>Book Trailer Production</h3>
<li><a href="http://www.cosproductions.com/videobookTrailer.php">Circle of Seven Productions: Book Trailers</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.jkscommunications.com/book-trailer-production/">JKS Communications: A Literary Publicity Firm</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.movingstories.tv/about">Moving Stories Book Trailers and Book Videos</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.writersdirect.net/services/book-trailers/">WritersDirect.net</a></li>
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<a href="http://publishersweekly.firstlightera.com/EN/Microsites/1/Authorbytes/AuthorsCanCreateABookTrailerHere">Author Bytes</a></li>
<li><a href="http://livingjacket.com/">Living Jacket.com</a></li>
<h3>Book Trailer Contests</h3>
<li><a href="http://talesfromouterlibraria.blogspot.com/2009/06/book-trailer-competition.html">Book Trailer Competition for High School Students</a></li>
<li><a href="http://authorspromotingauthors.blogspot.com/2009/06/trailer-to-stars-book-video-contest.html">Authors Promoting Authors</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.fantasybookreview.co.uk/blog/2009/02/07/book-video-awards-2009">Fantasy Book Reviews</a><br />
This UK site has a yearly Book Video Award</li>
<li><a href="http://www.mediabistro.com/galleycat/buzzpr/outsourcing_the_book_trailer_production_to_your_fans_88283.asp">Outsourcing the Book Trailer Production to Your Fans</a>. Authors Megan McCafferty and Lynn Messina ran book trailer contests for teen girls &#8211; a great example of a trailer contest.</li>
<h3>Are Book Trailers Effective?</h3>
<li><a href="http://kriswaldherr.com/blog/2009/03/publishing-monday-book-trailers-effective-or-just-fun/">Publishing Monday: Are Book Trailers Effective?</a> This author is charmed by trailers.</li>
<li><a href="http://buildbuzz.blogspot.com/2008/06/are-book-trailers-effective.html">Are Book Trailers Effective?</a> This post quotes the Wall Street Journal: &#8220;&#8221;There is scant evidence . . . that the average book trailer actually has much impact on book sales.&#8221;</li>
<li><a href="http://latinola.com/story.php?story=7537">Book Trailers Work!</a> From LatinoLA!</li>
<h3>Lesson Plans</h3>
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<a href="http://www.sblceastconn.org/CreatingaBookTrailer.pdf">Lesson plan for Book Trailers.</a> (pdf). References to NCTE/IRA, NETS and CTLanguage arts standards.</li>
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<h4>Holiday Writing Tips</h4>
<p><a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/frostys-top-6-writing-tips/">Frosty the Snowman&#8217;s Top 6 Writing Tips</a><br />
</a><a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/rudolphs-top-5-writing-tips/">Rudolph The Red Nosed Reindeer&#8217;s Top 5 Writing Tips</a><br />
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<a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/12-days-of-christmas-writing-tips12-days-of-christmas-writing-tips/">12 Days of Christmas Writing Tips</a></p>
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<p>Read about the <a href="http://www.christmas-lyrics.org/frosty-the-snowman-lyrics-song.html">history of this song</a>.<br />
Oh, what a great <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/redirect.html%3FASIN=B000YF38LE%26tag=darpatsrevnot-20%26lcode=xm2%26cID=2025%26ccmID=165953%26location=/o/ASIN/B000YF38LE%253FSubscriptionId=1N9AHEAQ2F6SVD97BE02">3-D snowman cake pan</a>!</p>
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<p>Frosty the snowman was a jolly happy soul,<br />
With a corncob pipe and a button nose<br />
And two eyes made out of coal.<br />
Frosty the snowman is a fairy tale, they say,<br />
He was made of snow<br />
<strong><br />
Extended character descriptions.</strong> Don’t be afraid to take time to describe the main character.  One the continuum of character descriptions, this one is longer than you’ll find in most children’s picturebooks.  But it works because this is a character story.</li>
<li>but the children<br />
Know how he came to life one day.<br />
There must have been some magic in that<br />
Old silk hat they found.<br />
For when they placed it on his head<br />
He began to dance around.</p>
<p><strong>Point of view.</strong> Notice the point of view here.  The attention is squarely on Frosty, not on the children who found the old silk hat.  When you write a story for kids, you don’t always have to put the child as the main character.</li>
<li>O, Frosty the snowman<br />
Was alive as he could be,<br />
And the children say he could laugh<br />
And play just the same as you and me.<br />
Thumpetty thump thump,<br />
Thumpety thump thump,<br />
Look at Frosty go.<br />
Thumpetty thump thump,<br />
Thumpety thump thump,<br />
Over the hills of snow.</p>
<p><strong>Language play.</strong>  This section doesn’t add much to the plot, it’s just pure language play.  But this is perfect for the younger audiences, who know that playing around with language is half the fun of reading a story or singing a song.  Great onomatopoeia.</li>
<li>Frosty the snowman knew<br />
The sun was hot that day,<br />
So he said, &#8220;Let&#8217;s run and<br />
We&#8217;ll have some fun<br />
Now before I melt away.&#8221;</p>
<p><strong>Conflict. </strong> Every good story needs conflict.  And the character’s attitude in the face, well, in the face of certain death, is evident.  It’s an attitude of taking joy where you find it and facing the future with courage.</p>
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<li>Down to the village,<br />
With a broomstick in his hand,<br />
Running here and there all<br />
Around the square saying,<br />
Catch me if you can.<br />
He led them down the streets of town<br />
Right to the traffic cop.<br />
And he only paused a moment when<br />
He heard him holler &#8220;Stop!&#8221;<br />
For Frosty the snow man<br />
Had to hurry on his way,</p>
<p><strong><br />
Development of the conflict. </strong> The traffic cop provides an extra bump of conflict that adds to the story’s development.  For picturebooks, it doesn’t have to be much; in fact, it can’t be huge, or you’re writing a novel.  This is perfect, just the introduction of an authority figure who yells, “Stop!” but can’t really do anything to stop the breakneck speed of Frosty’s life.
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<li>But he waved goodbye saying,<br />
&#8220;Don&#8217;t you cry,<br />
I&#8217;ll be back again some day.&#8221;<br />
Thumpetty thump thump,<br />
Thumpety thump thump,<br />
Look at Frosty go.<br />
Thumpetty thump thump,<br />
Thumpety thump thump,<br />
Over the hills of snow.</p>
<p><strong>Hope.</strong>  Children’s stories may end in tragedy, but the best offer a spot of hope.  Notice also the nice repetition of the language play that sends the story off with a nice echo.</li>
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<h4>Holiday Writing Tips</h4>
<p><a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/frostys-top-6-writing-tips/">Frosty the Snowman&#8217;s Top 6 Writing Tips</a><br />
</a><a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/rudolphs-top-5-writing-tips/">Rudolph The Red Nosed Reindeer&#8217;s Top 5 Writing Tips</a><br />
<a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/santas-top-5-writing-tips/">Santa Claus&#8217;s Top 5 Writing Tips</a><br />
<a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/the-gingerbread-mans-top-5-writing-tips/">The Gingerbread Man&#8217;s Top 5 Writing Tips</a><br />
<a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/12-days-of-christmas-writing-tips12-days-of-christmas-writing-tips/">12 Days of Christmas Writing Tips</a></p>
<h4>Rudolph the Red Nosed Reindeer, with a little help from UTube</h4>
<ol>
<li> Unique characters.  Give characters a tag, a physical or emotional something that makes them stand out from the crowd.  That red nose, in the context of a reindeer herd, is absolutely astoundnig.
<p>Rudolph, the red-nosed reindeer<br />
had a very shiny nose.<br />
And if you ever saw him,<br />
you would even say it glows. </li>
<p>Rudolph, the Musical, Act I</p>
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<li>Conflict.  The conflict here is the usual playground teasing and bullying of someone who is different.  It’s a classic theme because we can all identify with it on some level.  Don’t’ be afraid of classic themes; just use them in unique ways.
<p>Also, pile on the conflict.  The other reindeer do three things to Rudolph, each an escalation: laugh, call him names, exclude him from games.</p>
<p>All of the other reindeer<br />
used to laugh and call him names.<br />
They never let poor Rudolph<br />
join in any reindeer games.</p>
<p>&#8220;I&#8217;m All Alone&#8221; from Monty Python&#8217;s Spamalot</p>
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<p>Rudollph the Musical, Act II<br />
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<li>Turning point.  After the set up and the conflict, comes the turning point.  The crisis here is that Santa must deliver the toys to the children around the world, but the weather isn’t cooperating.
<p>Then one foggy Christmas Eve</p>
</li>
<li> The unusual characteristic becomes a blessing.  Again, this is a cliched way of handling a conflict and crisis, but it still works.  The very thing that sets the character apart, that makes him/her different and weak, is also the very thing that makes the hero able to save the day.  Of course, this means we are matching up conflict and resolution, too.  Santa also functions as a sort of mentor here, one who is able to recognize the unique qualities of Rudolph for what they are.
<p>Santa came to say:<br />
&#8220;Rudolph with your nose so bright,<br />
won&#8217;t you guide my sleigh tonight?&#8221;</p>
<p>Rudolph the Musical, Act III</p>
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<li>Rejoice.  It’s not just the climax here, but also the concept of a celebration of successfully completing a quest.  Give characters a moment to celebrate.  This often comes after a big battle, or a big effort to overcome something.
<p>Then all the reindeer loved him<br />
as they shouted out with glee,<br />
Rudolph the red-nosed reindeer,<br />
you&#8217;ll go down in history!</p>
<p>And, of course, Gene Autry, singing Rudolph, the Red Nosed Reindeer<br />
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<h4>Think the story is still a little slight for todays’ market? <a href="http://darcypattison.com/picture-books/picturebooks-folktales-or-modern-tales/ "> Here’s why. </a> </h4>
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<blockquote><h4>HAPPY HOLIDAYS</h4>
<p>For the last few years, I&#8217;ve posted writing tips from Winter Holiday personalities. For example, Frosty the Snowman has 6 Top Writing Tips. This year, as our Christmas gift to you, we&#8217;ve collected these into one downloadable pdf. </p>
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<p><a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/frostys-top-6-writing-tips/">Frosty the Snowman&#8217;s Top 6 Writing Tips</a><br />
</a><a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/rudolphs-top-5-writing-tips/">Rudolph The Red Nosed Reindeer&#8217;s Top 5 Writing Tips</a><br />
<a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/santas-top-5-writing-tips/">Santa Claus&#8217;s Top 5 Writing Tips</a><br />
<a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/the-gingerbread-mans-top-5-writing-tips/">The Gingerbread Man&#8217;s Top 5 Writing Tips</a><br />
<a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/12-days-of-christmas-writing-tips12-days-of-christmas-writing-tips/">12 Days of Christmas Writing Tips</a></p>
<h4>Santa’s Top 5 Writing Tips</h4>
<p>Just got an e-newsletter from the North Pole and Santa had these writing tips posted for the young-at-heart who are writing novels this year.  Stay tuned:  Santa promised to send me Rudolph&#8217;s writing tips tomorrow.</p>
<p>Santa&#8217;s Top 5 Writing Tips<br />
<a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/rudolphs-top-5-writing-tips/">Rudolph&#8217;s Top 5 Writing Tips</a><br />
<a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/frostys-top-6-writing-tips/">Frosty’s Top 6 Writing Tips</a></p>
<p><strong>Santa Claus Is Coming To Town</strong></p>
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<li>Oh! You better watch out,<br />
You better not cry,<br />
You better not pout,</p>
<p>1. Instant <a href="http://darcypattison.com/?s=conflict">Conflict</a>.  The characters are crying and pouting.  Make sure your story has instant conflict.</li>
<li>I&#8217;m telling you why:<br />
Santa Claus is coming to town!</p>
<p>2. Plots.  A Stranger comes to town.  It is said that there are only two <a href="http://darcypattison.com/?s=plot">plots </a>in the world.  A character leaves home, or a stranger comes to town.  This time it’s promised that the stranger will bring happiness and joy.  But will he?</li>
<li>He&#8217;s making a list,<br />
He&#8217;s checking it twice,<br />
He&#8217;s gonna find out<br />
who&#8217;s naughty or nice.<br />
Santa Claus is coming to town!</p>
<p>3. Character Motivations.  Are you checking your character’s motivations?  You should know who is naughty or nice and especially why.  No character should be totally one or the other. Soften <a href="http://darcypattison.com/?s=villains">villains</a> and round out main characters by giving them a flaw.</li>
<li>He sees you when you&#8217;re sleeping,<br />
He knows when you&#8217;re awake.<br />
He knows when you&#8217;ve been bad or good,<br />
So be good for goodness sake!</p>
<p>4. Know your <a href="http://darcypattison.com/?s=characters">characters</a>.  You should know your character’s feelings, actions, morals.  When s/he is admonished to be good, what would s/he do?  </li>
<li>So&#8230;You better watch out,<br />
You better not cry<br />
You better not pout,<br />
I&#8217;m telling you why.<br />
Santa Claus is coming to town.</p>
<p>5. <a href="http://darcypattison.com/?s=endings">Endings</a>.  Make sure the story’s ending resolves the conflict you set up.  Here, the song doesn’t resolve the conflict, so we have an unsettled feeling.  Well, that’s probably OK.  Christmas morning will tell the real tale.  And it’s OK to leave the reader wanting a little bit more, as long as you resolve the inner conflict and leave the reader with hope. </li>
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