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		<title>February 750 word challenge</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Jan 2012 14:00:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Darcy Pattison</dc:creator>
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<p>Take the <a href="http://750words.com/one_month">February 750word challenge</a>. The website 750words.com challenges writers every month to write every day that month and make it at least 750 words.</p>
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<p>And here&#8217;s the <a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/novels/think-like-a-writer-toc/ ‎">Table of Contents from January&#8217;s writing challenge</a>, in case you skipped any or want to repeat one.</p>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Jan 2012 12:41:19 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>We&#8217;re done! But I thought you might like a re-cap and a table of contents.</p>
<p>The 31-day Think Like a Writer series challenges writers to write at least 750 words each and every day for a month. I used the website 750words.org, but you can do it with pencil and paper or on your computer. These creative writing prompts are meant to be &#8220;morning pages&#8221; or practice in Thinking Like a Writer.</p>
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<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/writing-life/think-like-a-writer-day-1/ ‎">Observe the world around you</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/writing-life/details-think-like-a-writer/ ‎">Observe Sensory Details</a>
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<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/characters/noses-think-like-a-writer/ ‎">Noses: Observe Characters</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3482">Make Your Characters Move</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/how-to-create-a-mood/">How to Create a Mood with Sensory Details</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/writing-life/what-do-writers-think-about/">Discover Your Passions</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/be-mean-to-your-character/ ‎">Be Mean to Your Character</a>
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<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/characters/how-old-is-your-character/ ‎">How Old is Your Character?</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3491">Subtext: What is this story really about?</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/novels/scenes-think-like-a-writer/ ">Write in Scenes</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3496">Give Your Character Something to Hold</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3498">Emotion from a Photo</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/novels/3-ways-to-handle-time-in-a-novel/">3 Ways to Handle Time in a Novel</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/novels/titles-think-like-a-writer/">Titles that Readers will Love</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/novels/make-an-image-become-a-symbol/ ‎">Make an Image become a Symbol</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3506">What what you are SCARED to write</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/characters/everything-is-worse-and-worse/">Everything is Worse and Worse</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3513">Writers Need to Whine Sometimes</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3515">Found Object Stories</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/set-the-scene-panorama/">Set the Scene: Panorama</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/set-the-scene-zoom/">Set the Scene: Zoom</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/set-the-scene-scan/">Set the Scene: Scan</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3530">Omniscient POV</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3531">1st Person POV</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3532">3rd Person POV</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3541">Different Perspectives for Different Audiences</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3543">Before and After: Reveal Character</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=3545">Secrets and Letters</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/the-other-side-of-the-story/ ‎">The Other Side of the Story</a></li>
<li><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/unlovable-characters/ ">Unlovable Characters</a></li>
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<p>Today, write a reflection about your writing for the last month. What have you learned? What was hard? What was easy?</p>
<p>In light of what you have learned, where do you need to focus efforts to improve your writing?</p>
<p>Please share with me, post a comment! I always like to hear your good news!</p>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 28 Jan 2012 10:22:46 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>We&#8217;ve <a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/writing-life/think-like-a-writer-day-1/ ‎">come a long way in this 31 Days of Thinking Like a Writer</a>, a challenge to write at least 750 words each day. </p>
<h3>Secrets and Letters</h3>
<p><div id="attachment_3546" class="wp-caption alignleft" style="width: 460px"><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/calliope/234447967/"><img src="http://www.darcypattison.com/notes/wp-content/uploads//1860Letters-450x297.jpg" alt="" title="1860Letters" width="450" height="297" class="size-large wp-image-3546" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Letters written in the 1860s</p></div>We haven&#8217;t written any letters yet in our creative writing prompts, but today&#8217;s the day. Letters have an intimate feeling because they are usually written from one person&#8217;s heart to another person&#8217;s heart (unless it is a business letter, but that&#8217;s not what I&#8217;m talking about here). There&#8217;s an implied emotional connection right away. </p>
<p>Letters can be inform about facts or events; they carry emotional baggage that can be negative or positive. </p>
<p>Today, write a letter from your character to another character in the story. </p>
<li> Start with &#8220;I am writing to tell you something important. . . &#8221; </li>
<li>For fun, reveal a secret in the most emotional way possible.</li>
<li>Use concrete sensory details, set the mood of the letter with our mood exercise, and let the story unfold slowly. You can not fully reveal the secret until the last sentence or paragraph. </li>
<p>It&#8217;s an exercise in drawing out the tension in a short piece of writing, as you Think Like a Writer</p>
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<p>IN the on-going series of <a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/novels/think-like-a-writer-toc/">Thinking Like a Writer</a>, everyone can recite the plot diagram of rising action which ends in a climax and denouement. But writers can&#8217;t just recite the particulars of a diagram; instead, we must create a plot that changes a character in some way.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/jakescreations/61793300/"><img src="http://www.darcypattison.com/notes/wp-content/uploads//BeforeAfter-450x337.jpg" alt="" title="BeforeAfter" width="450" height="337" class="alignleft size-large wp-image-3544" /></a>One way to get at that change is to start by writing the Before and After character sections. Where is the character at the beginning of the story and how have they changed by the end.</p>
<p>For example, in the Before section of &#8220;A Christmas Carol,&#8221; Scrooge is miserable and miserly in three ways: toward the poor, toward his nephew, toward his employee and his family. He meets three ghosts, which leads to the After section, where he is kind and generous in three ways: toward the poor, toward his nephew, toward his employee and his family.</p>
<p>You may have a character moving from shy to bold.<br />
What scene, description, and/or character set-up will Show-Don&#8217;t-Tell that this character is shy? How can you contrast that with the After scene?</p>
<p>First, identify the character arc for your character.<br />
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<p>For the last two days, we have focused on point of view in your story or novel. Your writing tasks for today&#8211;for your <a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/writing-life/think-like-a-writer-day-1/ ‎">&#8220;750 words each day in January&#8221;</a>&#8211;is to practice POV. </p>
<p>Today, focus on 3rd person point of view.</p>
<h3>3rd person POV</h3>
<p><a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/notes/wp-content/uploads//3rd.jpg"><img src="http://www.darcypattison.com/notes/wp-content/uploads//3rd-450x338.jpg" alt="" title="3rd" width="450" height="338" class="alignleft size-large wp-image-3534" /></a>A 3rd person POV pulls back from the position inside the character&#8217;s head to be right beside the character. You see what s/he sees, hear what s/he sees, know the thoughts of the character. But the pronouns are he or she. </p>
<blockquote><p>Coach scribbled something on his clipboard and she leaned over to see that he was scratching out Jimmy&#8217;s name and writing Dave instead. No! He couldn&#8217;t sub in Dave, he was lousy at passing. Mary glanced up at the stands, where Jimmy&#8217;s mom waved around a video camera. Where had she borrowed it, Mary had no idea. His mom just said, it was Jimmy&#8217;s big game, his big break and she had to get it on film. Mary rubbed her temple, the headache still nagging. She wondered about the red pill Jimmy had given her, would it help ease the headache? Or would it make her loopy.</p></blockquote>
<p>Watch your pronouns: he and she, not I.</p>
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<p>Today, we&#8217;ll focus on 1st person point of view.<br />
<H3>1st person POV</h3>
<p><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/joe_andrews/3828703770/"><img src="http://www.darcypattison.com/notes/wp-content/uploads//1st-450x327.jpg" alt="" title="1st" width="450" height="327" class="alignleft size-large wp-image-3535" /></a>When the camera resides inside one character&#8217;s head and we hear that character speaking it is 1st person: the pronouns used are I, me, my. This POV is great for character novels where the inner life, the emotions, the personality are up front and center. </p>
<blockquote><p>Coach scribbled something on his clipboard and I leaned over to see that he was scratching out Jimmy&#8217;s name and writing Dave instead. No! He couldn&#8217;t sub in Dave, he was lousy at passing. I glanced up at the stands, where Jimmy&#8217;s mom waved around a huge video camera. Where she had borrowed it, who knows? She just said, it was Jimmy&#8217;s big game, his big break, she had to get it on film. I rubbed my temple. Headache still nagging. That red pill Jimmy gave me, would it help? Or would it send me loopy?</p></blockquote>
<p>Remember: Generally, you must stay in ONE POV choice at a time, not switch. You&#8217;ll probably find exceptions to the rule, but it&#8217;s a good rule for most situations. If you want to switch within a story, you would switch when you start a new chapter.</p>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Jan 2012 16:12:28 +0000</pubDate>
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<blockquote><p>A scan is a way to show a crowd scene economically, yet in an interesting way. It involves a series of small zooms: the quarterback’s mother is taping the game with a new video camera that she borrowed money to buy; the coach’s pencil is hovering over two names, trying to decide if he’ll start the injured quarterback or his backup; the head cheerleader is trying to shake off a headache and wondering if that red pill the quarterback gave her would help or not. In a short paragraph, you get the complexities of the crowd!</p></blockquote>
<p>READER wrote in to ask about point of view, or POV. When we dip into each person&#8217;s head this way, it is omniscient POV. Of course, you can do scans in any point of view, so that&#8217;s not the problem. Instead, READER wanted a clearer explanation of POV.</p>
<p>So, your writing tasks for the next 3 days for your 750 words is to practice POV. I&#8217;ll explain them here and then ask you to take a day for each POV. Even if you know this, it&#8217;s still good to go back and practice Thinking Like a Writer.</p>
<p>When you think about POV, you could ask a simple question: where is the camera?</p>
<h3>Omniscient POV.</h3>
<p><a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/callumscott2/280532845/"><img src="http://www.darcypattison.com/notes/wp-content/uploads//aerialview-450x337.jpg" alt="" title="aerialview" width="450" height="337" class="alignleft size-large wp-image-3533" /></a>For the omniscient POV, the camera is overhead, looking at things from an overall perspective and it&#8217;s an all-knowing camera. It knows what every character is thinking and can dip in and out of any perspective at any point. The SCAN that I wrote above is omniscient.</p>
<p><H3>1st person POV</h3>
<p>When the camera resides inside one character&#8217;s head and we hear that character speaking it is 1st person: the pronouns used are I, me, my. This POV is great for character novels where the inner life, the emotions, the personality are up front and center. </p>
<blockquote><p>Coach scribbled something on his clipboard and I leaned over to see that he was scratching out Jimmy&#8217;s name and writing Dave instead. No! He couldn&#8217;t sub in Dave, he was lousy at passing. I glanced up at the stands, where Jimmy&#8217;s mom waved around a huge video camera. Where she had borrowed it, who knows? She just said, it was Jimmy&#8217;s big game, his big break, she had to get it on film. I rubbed my temple. Headache still nagging. That red pill Jimmy gave me, would it help? Or would it send me loopy?</p></blockquote>
<h3>3rd person POV</h3>
<p>A 3rd person POV pulls back from the position inside the character&#8217;s head to be right beside the character. You see what s/he sees, hear what s/he sees, know the thoughts of the character. But the pronouns are he or she. </p>
<blockquote><p>Coach scribbled something on his clipboard and she leaned over to see that he was scratching out Jimmy&#8217;s name and writing Dave instead. No! He couldn&#8217;t sub in Dave, he was lousy at passing. Mary glanced up at the stands, where Jimmy&#8217;s mom waved around a video camera. Where had she borrowed it, Mary had no idea. His mom just said, it was Jimmy&#8217;s big game, his big break and she had to get it on film. Mary rubbed her temple, the headache still nagging. She wondered about the red pill Jimmy had given her, would it help ease the headache? Or would it make her loopy.</p></blockquote>
<p>The differences are subtle, but important between 3rd and 1st. 3rd person POV is the most common POV for storytelling and novels today. Use the 1st person POV when you have a unique character with a unique voice. One disadvantage of 1st POV is that you are limited to scenes where the character is present, so you must plot accordingly.</p>
<p>Today, practice writing a scene in Omniscient Voice.<br />
Tomorrow, try 1st person and the next day 3rd. I&#8217;ll remind you on the next two days of the ways we are practicing Thinking Like a Writer.</p>
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<p><strong>A scan</strong> is a way to show a crowd scene economically, yet in an interesting way. It involves a series of small zooms: the quarterback&#8217;s mother is taping the game with a new video camera that she borrowed money to buy; the coach&#8217;s pencil is hovering over two names, trying to decide if he&#8217;ll start the injured quarterback or his backup; the head cheerleader is trying to shake off a headache and wondering if that red pill the quarterback gave her would help or not. In a short paragraph, you get the complexities of the crowd!</p>
<p>As always, start with the <a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/writing-life/details-think-like-a-writer/">basic sensory details list</a>, but this time you skip around. You can do full details for the coach, the quarterback&#8217;s mother, the quarterback, and the head cheerleader if you want; or you can do partials for each, but focus on getting great &#8220;telling details.&#8221; If you&#8217;re rusty on doing sensory details&#8211;and you have to fill out your 750 words anyway&#8211;go ahead and do the full sensory details list for each. Then you&#8217;ll have a wide selection to choose from as you Think Like a Writer.</p>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Jan 2012 10:04:06 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Darcy Pattison</dc:creator>
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<p><strong>Zooms</strong> focus in on tiny details. The pencil stub the coach is using to put check marks by player&#8217;s names on his clip board, the taped thumb of the quarterback, the aching toe of the head cheerleader. Usually, you&#8217;ll need to include sharp sensory details: what the character sees, hears, touches, tastes and feels (not emotions, but temperature and texture). Avoid the cliched details and include interesting and different, but telling details. In the picture here, don&#8217;t forget to include a description of the callous, the whorls on the palm and such.</p>
<p>Start with the <a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/writing-life/details-think-like-a-writer/">basic sensory details list</a> and go from there, as you Think Like a Writer!</p>
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