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		<title>Generous Agents</title>
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The holidays and the end of the year are bringing out the generous nature of agents!
The 2nd Sort-of-Annual Stupendously Ultimate First Paragraph Challenge

Deadline: 7pm. EST, Thursday, December 11, 2008.
Who: Literary agent Nathan Bransford, Curtis Brown, San Francisco office
What: Post the first paragraph of your WIP and compete for the prize of a partial critique, query [...]<p><table height="75" border="1" align="center" bordercolor="#a11b1b"><tr><td border="0" bgcolor="#a11b1b"><a href="http://www.booktrailermanual.com"><img src="http://www.darcypattison.com/notes/wp-content/uploads//FNClickNow.png" height="72" width="163" border="0"></a><br /></td><td valign="top" width="150"><a href="http://www.booktrailermanual.com/"><img src="http://booktrailermanual.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/BTThumb.png"><br />It's Here.</a></td></tr></table></p>
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<p>The holidays and the end of the year are bringing out the generous nature of agents!</p>
<h4>The 2nd Sort-of-Annual Stupendously Ultimate First Paragraph Challenge</h4>
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<li><strong>Deadline</strong>: 7pm. EST, Thursday, December 11, 2008.</li>
<li><strong>Who</strong>: Literary agent Nathan Bransford, Curtis Brown, San Francisco office</li>
<li><strong>What</strong>: Post the first paragraph of your WIP and compete for the prize of a partial critique, query critique or a 15 minute phone call.</li>
<li><strong>How</strong>: Skip over to <a href="http://nathanbransford.blogspot.com/2008/12/2nd-sort-of-annual-stupendously.html">Bransford&#8217;s website and post your paragraph</a> in the comments. </li>
<li><strong>Warning</strong>: The competition is stiff. With 10 hours left, there were 1176 comments/paragraphs.</li>
<li><strong>Attention</strong>: This is a learning opportunity. Read through at least some of these paragraphs and see which you like and which you don&#8217;t. What grabs your attention?  Check back when Bransford posts the winners and vote on the finalist. Do you agree with his choices or not? Why or why not?</li>
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<p>For more on opening lines:</p>
<ul>
<li><a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/opening-lines-the-story-in-miniature/">Opening Lines: The Story in Miniature</a></li>
<li><a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/openings-5-ways-they-go-wrong/">Openings: 5 Ways They Go Wrong</a></li>
<li><a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/prophetic-openings/">Prophetic Openings</a></li>
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<h4>Take a Holiday Break from Queries and Submit a Chapter Instead</h4>
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<li><strong>Dates</strong>: December 15 to January 15</li>
<li><strong>Who</strong>: Firebrand Literary</li>
<li><strong>What</strong>: Firebrand agents want to read your first chapter and will forego the usual query. This is a big task for those agents and a great opportunity for writers of all kinds.  For those of you who have never got a request for a partial (probably because your query was weak), this is your golden chance.  Let your writing speak for itself.</li>
<li><strong>How</strong>: Go to the <a href="http://www.firebrandliterary.com/query-holiday">Query Holiday posting</a> on Firebrand&#8217;s website. </li>
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<p>For more on opening chapters:</p>
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<li>Take the <a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/scene-box-text/">Scene Box Test</a></li>
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<a href="http://darcypattison.com/revision/begin-at-the-beginning/">Begin at the Beginning</a></li>
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