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		<title>How To Post an Amazon Review: Random Acts of Publicity</title>
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For more information on the <a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/pr-notes/random-acts/">Random Acts of Publicity Week</a>, see this post or the <a href="http://www.facebook.com/home.php?#!/event.php?eid=106842632706179&#038;ref=ts">Facebook Event page</a>. </p>
<h4>Today&#8217;s task for Random Acts of Publicity: Post a review of a book somewhere. Your blog, GoodReads, Amazon, a school newsletter, a bulletin board. Anywhere.</h4>
<h2>Amazon Reviews</h2>
<p>Are you like many authors, always intending to post a review on Amazon, but haven&#8217;t taken the leap yet? Here&#8217;s something to think about.</p>
<p><strong>2x: Experts are twice as likely to share information.</strong> Why should you, an author (or aspiring author), review a book for someone else? Because as an author, you&#8217;re an expert on literature. <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Anatomy-Buzz-Revisited-Word-Mouth/dp/0385526326/ref=nosim?tag=darpatsrevnot-20<br />
">Studies of word-of-mouth promotions</a> say that experts usually tell twice as many people about something they liked. You are more likely to talk up a book than the normal Amazon shopper simply because you are an expert.<span id="more-2848"></span></p>
<h3>What to Put in an Amazon Review</h3>
<p>OK. But what do you write about in a review?<br />
Your honest opinion about the book! That&#8217;s it.</p>
<p>Short 50-300 word reviews will work best, something short enough to scan easily. Usually people reading the reviews want a quick glance at what others are saying.</p>
<p>You can also post videos, reviewing a book. Tape yourself talking about the book and upload it, following their instructions.</p>
<h3> How to Post an Amazon Review</h3>
<p>I suggest you write your review before you go to visit Amazon. That way, you can revise and edit until it&#8217;s right. Once you get to Amazon, you can just cut and paste.</p>
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<li>If you don&#8217;t have an account with Amazon, you&#8217;ll have to create one. There should be a link for this on the front page.</li>
<li>To post a review, go to the page for the book you want to review and scroll down to the reviews. On the right hand side just above the other reviews, you&#8217;ll see a button that says,  &#8220;Create Your Own Review.&#8221; Click on that.</li>
<li>It will ask you to confirm that you are over 13, to rate the title, and give your review a title.</li>
<li>Below these questions is a box for you to either write in, or to cut and paste your review.</li>
<li><strong>Notice a couple things.</strong>
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<li><strong>Product Links.</strong> You can use the insert a product link to link to other books/products if you want. That means you can add links to other titles by the author, if you want to.</li>
<li><strong>Tags.</strong> The Tags are important to fill out, too because they help the book get found by Amazon&#8217;s search by topics. The more times reviewers agree that this book is appropriate for this topic, the more likely it is to be in the top search entries.</li>
<li><strong>Video Reviews.</strong> Also, notice that they accept video reviews! Haven&#8217;t done that myself yet, but I want to on a couple books.</li>
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Preview the Review. If all looks well &#8211; click to post it! </li>
<li>If needed, you can come back at any point to edit the review.</li>
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<h4>Today&#8217;s task for Random Acts of Publicity: Post a review of a book somewhere. Your blog, GoodReads, Amazon, a school newsletter, a bulletin board. Anywhere.</h4>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Nov 2009 21:46:42 +0000</pubDate>
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<p>I&#8217;m waiting for critiques from four readers on the second draft of my novel. I know what I think needs work, and it will be interesting to see if the readers agree.</p>
<p>Meanwhile:<span id="more-2314"></span><br />
<H3>Between Drafts</h3>
<p><img src="http://www.darcypattison.com/notes/wp-content/uploads//messy.jpg" alt="http://www.flickr.com/photos/denverjeffrey/1950409800/" title="http://www.flickr.com/photos/denverjeffrey/1950409800/" width="240" height="181" class="alignleft size-full wp-image-2315" /><strong>Despair v. Hope.</strong> I&#8217;m vacillating between hope and despair. My gut tells me this draft is a big improvement, but my inner critic is harsh. I don&#8217;t know if I should hide my head in shame or tall taller with pleasure in what I&#8217;ve done.</p>
<p><strong>Cleaning the office.</strong> Yes, that chore got done. Sorta. I&#8217;m doing neglected chores, like filing, updating my bio on various websites, planning holiday meals, and actually reading.</p>
<p><strong>Shorter pieces.</strong> I&#8217;m working on some shorter pieces. I&#8217;ve had a nf article accepted by Highlights, I&#8217;m working on another short project, and I&#8217;m re-reading almost every failed picture mss in my files to see if I know how to fix any of them. I wrote a piece for our regional SCBWI newsletter. These aren&#8217;t time-wasters, but important things which just get muscled out of the way by the heftier novel. I&#8217;m glad to be playing with the chihuahuas for a change.</p>
<p><strong>Preparing Emotionally for the Next Draft. </strong>I&#8217;m getting ready emotionally to &#8220;kill my darlings,&#8221; to give up my attachment to the current plot and form of the novel if needed, and to dig in and work hard.</p>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Feb 2009 15:15:57 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Darcy Pattison</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[novel revision]]></category>
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		<category><![CDATA[emotions]]></category>
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<p>It&#8217;s well know that <a href="http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/psychology-of-revising-fear-humility-1">I don&#8217;t want an honest critique</a> on my novels or picture books! But for some reason, people keep giving me exactly what I don&#8217;t want. </p>
<h1>Conflicting Emotions of Receiving a Critique</h1>
<p>Yesterday, when my local critique group talked about my latest picture book manuscript, three emotions held sway.</p>
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<li><strong>Embarrassment.</strong> I am always embarrassed when someone reads one of my works-in-progress, because it&#8217;s, well, not perfect. I know it&#8217;s not finished, it&#8217;s a draft. I know I shouldn&#8217;t be embarrassed, that everyone has to go through drafts. Yet, every time, I just want to hide. I want to cry. I am totally and thoroughly embarrassed.</li>
<li><strong>Outrage.</strong> What?  You don&#8217;t understand that part of my story?  It&#8217;s perfectly clear!  Did you even read it? Even while embarrassment reigns, I&#8217;m also outraged that the readers didn&#8217;t understand my story, didn&#8217;t agree with my wording, didn&#8217;t feel the emotion that I know I evoked. Yes, I&#8217;m mad.  At myself, as much as you, but I channel all that outrage toward you.</li>
<li><strong>Working it Out. </strong> But even while I&#8217;m embarrassed and outraged, I&#8217;m rewriting in my head.  Oh, if THAT is what bothers you, I could do this or that, or say it this way.  I won&#8217;t let on, of course, that I&#8217;m doing that, because then you would be right (see above!).  But I&#8217;m doing it.  Absolutely.  Every time. Because I know that I&#8217;m trying to communicate something and if you don&#8217;t get it, then my communication isn&#8217;t clear and I&#8217;ve GOT to fix it.  The rational brain is there, behind the emotions, clearly, calmly trying to figure out how to communicate EXACTLY what I want.  Not what you want me to communicate. But what I want to communicate.</li>
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<p>Critique group, I love you. But don&#8217;t let it go to your heads. Because I&#8217;m still mad at you! BTW, for the next meeting, I&#8217;m bringing a revised version of that last story back for a fresh look.</p>
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