Scenes: 5 Simple Questions for Revision

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My WIP is a draft of a novel that I"m going through and expanding. When I read through the draft it Continue Reading

Zoom In

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Develop Your Character Inside and Outside I'm working on a revision of an older story and am Continue Reading

Larger Than Life in Chapter 1

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Give Readers a Larger Than Life Protagonist In my new novel, I've written about a dozen different Continue Reading

Describing Characters? Be Subtle

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When should your characters notice and comment on something and when should it be just subtly Continue Reading

8 Ways to Enrich Your Character

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Character Revision: 8 Ways to Jumpstart a Make Over You have a first draft, but you realize that Continue Reading

Eavesdropping: Real Dialogue

Notes from the Field If you're revising a novel or picture book, one step is to look at the Continue Reading

3 Ways to Show, Don’t Tell

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Classic advice to beginning fiction writers: Show, Don't Tell. I taught several sessions to teachers Continue Reading

Success: What Price Does Your Character Pay?

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I'm getting much closer to actually starting my new novel, but I'm still asking myself a crucial Continue Reading

Establish the Emotional Arc

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As I'm working on the plan for this new novel, creating characters and trying out voices, I'm trying Continue Reading

Crowded with Characters? Create Mini-Conflicts

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Mini-Conflicts Help Characters Stand Out For my WIP, I'm spending the week fleshing out characters. Continue Reading