http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/vivid-images-sensory-details/ Sat, 11 Feb 2012 15:30:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/vivid-images-sensory-details/comment-page-1/#comment-10611 Beat Sheets Help Plan a Scene's Actions & Emotions Sat, 06 Nov 2010 09:17:10 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=2599#comment-10611 [...] might notice, this detailed beat sheet reads like a narrative summary. What’s missing is the detailed development of the scene with full dialogue, action, emotions and thought. Some people even write a full novel with narrative summary, then go back and expand. I feel like [...] [...] might notice, this detailed beat sheet reads like a narrative summary. What’s missing is the detailed development of the scene with full dialogue, action, emotions and thought. Some people even write a full novel with narrative summary, then go back and expand. I feel like [...]

]]> http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/vivid-images-sensory-details/comment-page-1/#comment-8416 Talking About Novel Revision: Bull's Eyes and Focusing a Camera Fri, 16 Apr 2010 15:28:29 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=2599#comment-8416 [...] — these are indications that your camera lenses needs to be focused. You can do this with great sensory details, showing the character’s attitudes, thoughts, emotions, and by careful attention to language. [...] [...] — these are indications that your camera lenses needs to be focused. You can do this with great sensory details, showing the character’s attitudes, thoughts, emotions, and by careful attention to language. [...]

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