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		<title>By: YA Book Reads &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Interview with Robin Bridges</title>
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		<dc:creator>YA Book Reads &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Interview with Robin Bridges</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2012 00:05:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] I usually write a chapter or two when I get a new idea, then outline the rest to make sure I have a big enough idea to fill a novel.  Then I might rewrite those first few chapters and get the beginning of the story right before finishing the first draft.  When I’m ready to revise, I print a shrunken version of my manuscript out and edit with blue ink. (Shrunken manuscripts come from Darcy Pattison’s book, NOVEL METAMORPHOSIS!) [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] I usually write a chapter or two when I get a new idea, then outline the rest to make sure I have a big enough idea to fill a novel.  Then I might rewrite those first few chapters and get the beginning of the story right before finishing the first draft.  When I’m ready to revise, I print a shrunken version of my manuscript out and edit with blue ink. (Shrunken manuscripts come from Darcy Pattison’s book, NOVEL METAMORPHOSIS!) [...]</p>
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		<title>By: What&#8217;s On My Night Stand &#171; Emily Smith Pearce</title>
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		<dc:creator>What&#8217;s On My Night Stand &#171; Emily Smith Pearce</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Sep 2011 08:37:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] of my work in progress, a young adult novel. I found out about the shrunken manuscript technique here and can&#8217;t wait to dig into that. Also using the spreadsheet technique (from the same [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] of my work in progress, a young adult novel. I found out about the shrunken manuscript technique here and can&#8217;t wait to dig into that. Also using the spreadsheet technique (from the same [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Using the 3 Act Structure to Guide Novel Revision</title>
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		<dc:creator>Using the 3 Act Structure to Guide Novel Revision</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Aug 2011 19:14:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] the revisions, the structure has become top-heavy. Skimming those chapters or laying them out in a shrunken manuscript revealed that several scenes repeated; there was escalation with each repetition, so it wasn’t [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] the revisions, the structure has become top-heavy. Skimming those chapters or laying them out in a shrunken manuscript revealed that several scenes repeated; there was escalation with each repetition, so it wasn’t [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Uma Krishnaswami: Shrunken Manuscript</title>
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		<dc:creator>Uma Krishnaswami: Shrunken Manuscript</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Jun 2011 17:23:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Novel Revision Retreats rely heavily upon the Shrunken Manuscript technique. Basically, you use the magic of word processors to shrink the font of the mss until you can see [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Novel Revision Retreats rely heavily upon the Shrunken Manuscript technique. Basically, you use the magic of word processors to shrink the font of the mss until you can see [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Shrunken Manuscript Pics</title>
		<link>http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/shrunken-manuscript/comment-page-1/#comment-11099</link>
		<dc:creator>Shrunken Manuscript Pics</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Feb 2011 18:16:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Walker has some great photos of a shrunken manuscript. Click on the photos to see it [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Walker has some great photos of a shrunken manuscript. Click on the photos to see it [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Alternate Ways to Approach a Novel</title>
		<link>http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/shrunken-manuscript/comment-page-1/#comment-10978</link>
		<dc:creator>Alternate Ways to Approach a Novel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Feb 2011 18:04:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] way works for that first draft. I believe that in the revision phase, you DO have to take a look at the big picture to make sure everything fits into [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] way works for that first draft. I believe that in the revision phase, you DO have to take a look at the big picture to make sure everything fits into [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Tracking Red Herrings &#171; Nitz Bits</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tracking Red Herrings &#171; Nitz Bits</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Dec 2010 21:23:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Retreat.  One question about pacing made me think about how to use Darcy Pattison&#8217;s shrunken manuscript technique as a way to make sure that red herrings and clues are being distributed throughout the [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Retreat.  One question about pacing made me think about how to use Darcy Pattison&#8217;s shrunken manuscript technique as a way to make sure that red herrings and clues are being distributed throughout the [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Final Thoughts on Revision &#171; Writing on the sidewalk</title>
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		<dc:creator>Final Thoughts on Revision &#171; Writing on the sidewalk</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Jun 2010 19:27:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] then using a marker highlighting the strongest chapters. For full instructions please select this link.  This more visual form of revision helps you to locate areas that drag in the manuscript. I think [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] then using a marker highlighting the strongest chapters. For full instructions please select this link.  This more visual form of revision helps you to locate areas that drag in the manuscript. I think [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Charlotte Rains Dixon</title>
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		<dc:creator>Charlotte Rains Dixon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Feb 2010 17:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow, doing anything like this has never occurred to me.  I am such a visual person that being able to see where the strongest chapters land would be hugely helpful.  Thanks for this post.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, doing anything like this has never occurred to me.  I am such a visual person that being able to see where the strongest chapters land would be hugely helpful.  Thanks for this post.</p>
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		<title>By: Jeremy Trylch</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeremy Trylch</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Feb 2010 02:14:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for posting about the Shrunken MSS.  I found it a very useful technique.  Interesting and fun!  

I don&#039;t have a printer, so I used the highlighter in the Formatting Palette and saved my document as a PDF.  I was then able to evaluate my MSS using the thumbnail drawer of the PDF.  The thumbnails really shrink the MSS.  Like a mini-me of the Shrunken MSS!  

But it works great!  And it&#039;s Green!  I posted about it on my blog with links back to your site as well as Kate&#039;s

http://jeremytrylch.com/blog/shrunken-manuscript-green-variation/

Thanks for the help!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for posting about the Shrunken MSS.  I found it a very useful technique.  Interesting and fun!  </p>
<p>I don&#8217;t have a printer, so I used the highlighter in the Formatting Palette and saved my document as a PDF.  I was then able to evaluate my MSS using the thumbnail drawer of the PDF.  The thumbnails really shrink the MSS.  Like a mini-me of the Shrunken MSS!  </p>
<p>But it works great!  And it&#8217;s Green!  I posted about it on my blog with links back to your site as well as Kate&#8217;s</p>
<p><a href="http://jeremytrylch.com/blog/shrunken-manuscript-green-variation/" rel="nofollow">http://jeremytrylch.com/blog/shrunken-manuscript-green-variation/</a></p>
<p>Thanks for the help!</p>
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