http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/scenes/ Sat, 11 Feb 2012 15:30:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/scenes/comment-page-1/#comment-11238 Almost Right? No! Revise Scenes Until you Hit Bull's Eye! Mon, 07 Mar 2011 15:34:51 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=2171#comment-11238 [...] The second draft hits one ring closer to the center because you focused on selecting great scenes, revised those scenes, layered plot layers and subplots, all the while avoiding the most common pitfalls. Successive [...] [...] The second draft hits one ring closer to the center because you focused on selecting great scenes, revised those scenes, layered plot layers and subplots, all the while avoiding the most common pitfalls. Successive [...]

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