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		<title>By: dirtywhitecandy</title>
		<link>http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/feedback/comment-page-1/#comment-4607</link>
		<dc:creator>dirtywhitecandy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Jun 2009 12:11:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent tips. Too often if you give a &#039;naive&#039; reader your manuscript they are overwhelmed by the fact that you&#039;ve managed to write anything at all. Result: gushing but mainly useless feedback. If they know you write professionally, they may be so overawed that they daren&#039;t say if they have a niggle that something is wrong. Others may be on the lookout for the bits that are about them or people they know, or that show what you think of them (apparently). So this tip of giving them specific tasks while writing is very helpful.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent tips. Too often if you give a &#8216;naive&#8217; reader your manuscript they are overwhelmed by the fact that you&#8217;ve managed to write anything at all. Result: gushing but mainly useless feedback. If they know you write professionally, they may be so overawed that they daren&#8217;t say if they have a niggle that something is wrong. Others may be on the lookout for the bits that are about them or people they know, or that show what you think of them (apparently). So this tip of giving them specific tasks while writing is very helpful.</p>
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		<title>By: 30 Ways to Write a Stronger Novel</title>
		<link>http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/feedback/comment-page-1/#comment-1997</link>
		<dc:creator>30 Ways to Write a Stronger Novel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Feb 2009 22:37:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Affects Setting Theme Affects Characters and Actions Choosing Subplots Knitting Subplots Together Feedback Stay the Course Revise Again The End The New [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Affects Setting Theme Affects Characters and Actions Choosing Subplots Knitting Subplots Together Feedback Stay the Course Revise Again The End The New [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Anastasia</title>
		<link>http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/feedback/comment-page-1/#comment-74</link>
		<dc:creator>Anastasia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 Sep 2007 16:17:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great idea! (And very easy to use!)</description>
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