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	<title>Comments on: Begin at the Beginning</title>
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		<title>By: Kelly R. Martin</title>
		<link>http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/begin-at-the-beginning/comment-page-1/#comment-9176</link>
		<dc:creator>Kelly R. Martin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jun 2010 14:39:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I prefer to start at the point the life of the protagonist becomes interesting to someone other than themselves and their associates.  It must be interesting for the reader.  The protagonist can spend some time dwelling on what got them to that point in their lives, as the story progresses, but jumping into a key event in the first chapter is critical I believe.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I prefer to start at the point the life of the protagonist becomes interesting to someone other than themselves and their associates.  It must be interesting for the reader.  The protagonist can spend some time dwelling on what got them to that point in their lives, as the story progresses, but jumping into a key event in the first chapter is critical I believe.</p>
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		<title>By: 30 Ways to Write a Stronger Novel</title>
		<link>http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/begin-at-the-beginning/comment-page-1/#comment-3345</link>
		<dc:creator>30 Ways to Write a Stronger Novel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Mar 2009 00:09:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Pulse Connecting Emotional and Narrative Arcs Unique Character Dialogue Character Description Begin at the Beginning Scene Cuts Take a Break Power Abs for Novels Angel Moments in Your Novel Powerful Endings Tie Up [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Pulse Connecting Emotional and Narrative Arcs Unique Character Dialogue Character Description Begin at the Beginning Scene Cuts Take a Break Power Abs for Novels Angel Moments in Your Novel Powerful Endings Tie Up [...]</p>
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		<title>By: darcy</title>
		<link>http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/begin-at-the-beginning/comment-page-1/#comment-70</link>
		<dc:creator>darcy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Sep 2007 15:41:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Interesting that you start too late in one, but just right in another.  I almost always start too late and must add to the beginning.

Darcy</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Interesting that you start too late in one, but just right in another.  I almost always start too late and must add to the beginning.</p>
<p>Darcy</p>
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		<title>By: Sarah</title>
		<link>http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/begin-at-the-beginning/comment-page-1/#comment-69</link>
		<dc:creator>Sarah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Sep 2007 10:39:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I started too late in my first novel.  I added a few pages at the beginning with my last revision; the goal is to ground the reader so they can see how much the MC changes.

In my WIP I think I started at the beginning.  I am in the exploratory draft stage (similar writing style to Janni) so I might discover that what I think is the beginning is not the beginning.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I started too late in my first novel.  I added a few pages at the beginning with my last revision; the goal is to ground the reader so they can see how much the MC changes.</p>
<p>In my WIP I think I started at the beginning.  I am in the exploratory draft stage (similar writing style to Janni) so I might discover that what I think is the beginning is not the beginning.</p>
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