Comments on: Revising for Audience http://www.darcypattison.com/picture-books/revising-for-audience/ Sat, 11 Feb 2012 15:30:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 By: Darcy Pattison http://www.darcypattison.com/picture-books/revising-for-audience/comment-page-1/#comment-4666 Darcy Pattison Sun, 28 Jun 2009 21:58:20 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1948#comment-4666 Great! Hope it helps! Darcy Great! Hope it helps!

Darcy

]]> By: Sue Bradford Edwards http://www.darcypattison.com/picture-books/revising-for-audience/comment-page-1/#comment-4665 Sue Bradford Edwards Sun, 28 Jun 2009 21:11:38 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1948#comment-4665 Darcy- What a fantastic idea! I have a picture book about a kid going to work with a parent and some critiquers have asked very similar questions to those you've been fielding. I think you've just given me a nudge in the right direction! --SueBE Darcy-
What a fantastic idea! I have a picture book about a kid going to work with a parent and some critiquers have asked very similar questions to those you’ve been fielding. I think you’ve just given me a nudge in the right direction!
–SueBE

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