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		<title>By: How to Write a Picture Book for Kids</title>
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		<dc:creator>How to Write a Picture Book for Kids</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Feb 2009 22:55:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Picture Books standards: 32 pages Putting the Picture in Picture Books Write the First Draft of a Picture Book The Dual Audience for Picture Books Did you Write a Picture Book or Something Else? Check Your Picture Book&#8217;s Story Arc Shakespeare Helps You Write a Better Picture Book Picture Book Settings Options for Picture Book Characters Playing With Words for Picture Books Page 32 How to Mock Up a Picture Book 5 Ways to Make The Reader Turn the Page Revise the Picture Book Text [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Picture Books standards: 32 pages Putting the Picture in Picture Books Write the First Draft of a Picture Book The Dual Audience for Picture Books Did you Write a Picture Book or Something Else? Check Your Picture Book&#8217;s Story Arc Shakespeare Helps You Write a Better Picture Book Picture Book Settings Options for Picture Book Characters Playing With Words for Picture Books Page 32 How to Mock Up a Picture Book 5 Ways to Make The Reader Turn the Page Revise the Picture Book Text [...]</p>
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		<title>By: How to Mock Up a Picture Book</title>
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		<dc:creator>How to Mock Up a Picture Book</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Jan 2009 01:43:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] The story feels too wordy. (Cut in half!) [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Debbi Michiko Florence</title>
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		<dc:creator>Debbi Michiko Florence</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 15 Aug 2008 14:11:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I just wanted to let you know, in appreciation of your blog, I have passed along to you the Brilliante Weblog award. ;)

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