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THE SECRET TO SUCCESSFUL NOVELS: ReviseIMPROVE Your FIRST DRAFT
Congratulations! You've finished the first draft of a novel. "I didn't realize I didn't know anything about revising until I took Darcy's Novel Revision Retreat. I finally "got it" that reworking a manuscript is not revising. To revise something means to re-vision it, to see it through a new lens. The workshop and the Novel Metamorphosis workbook moved me from wordsmith to novel writer." – Kirby Larson, author of Hattie Big Sky, winner of the 2007 Newbery Honor Book Award (the highest award given to children's novels by the American Library Association). Kirby had been writing for nearly 20 years and had published four chapter books and a picture book before writing – and revising – Hattie Big Sky (Delacorte). This story sold in ten-days-flat to the first editor who saw it. DIAGNOSE Your FIRST DRAFT'S STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSESFollow simple instructions to:
PLAN Your REVISION IN 8 KEY AREASAfter the first draft is diagnosed, use simple writing techniques and tips to plan specific revisions:
SUCCESS STORY: Revision Equals a Better Book"I attended Darcy’s Novel Revision Workshop in July 2006. I revamped the entire story using the techniques Darcy taught in the workbook. The very first editor who read the revised manuscript bought the book."-- , Kristin O'Donnell Tubb, author of Autumn Winifred Oliver Does Things Different (Delacorte, 2008). Read Tubb's success story: writing a better book TABLE OF CONTENTS
WRITING TEACHER, DARCY PATTISONIn 1999, writer and writing teacher Darcy Pattison created the Novel Revision Retreat to meet the needs of struggling novelists. Since then, her passionate teaching has touched writers nationwide as she encouraged them, "I believe in your story." Her teaching has taken her around the nation: Hawaii, California, Washington, Arizona, Michigan, Georgia, Tennessee, Oklahoma, Arkansas, Illinois, Iowa, and Louisiana. Her blog, Revision Notes, which gives writing tips and discusses writing techniques, receives over 60,000 visitors per year. ORDER NOW FROM AMAZON.COM |