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		<title>By: Darcy Pattison</title>
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		<dc:creator>Darcy Pattison</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Jun 2009 16:09:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s probably a more wide-spread practice than we know. Those without agents could use this strategy; it&#039;s just helpful to have someone else say, &quot;Let&#039;s pause her and do so and so.&quot;

Darcy</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s probably a more wide-spread practice than we know. Those without agents could use this strategy; it&#8217;s just helpful to have someone else say, &#8220;Let&#8217;s pause her and do so and so.&#8221;</p>
<p>Darcy</p>
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		<title>By: Kristin Wolden Nitz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kristin Wolden Nitz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Jun 2009 13:25:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The process described by Jen Rofe is almost exactly what happened with one of my novels.  My agent wound up sending it to seven editors.  We evaluated the feedback and came up with a plan to address the very similar concerns of the various editors.  I think it means another 20,000 words of new material, but I&#039;m looking forward to the process.  I&#039;m able to show more of my characters interacting, and I&#039;ve come up with a &quot;darkest moment&quot; that ups the personal stakes for my character considerably.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The process described by Jen Rofe is almost exactly what happened with one of my novels.  My agent wound up sending it to seven editors.  We evaluated the feedback and came up with a plan to address the very similar concerns of the various editors.  I think it means another 20,000 words of new material, but I&#8217;m looking forward to the process.  I&#8217;m able to show more of my characters interacting, and I&#8217;ve come up with a &#8220;darkest moment&#8221; that ups the personal stakes for my character considerably.</p>
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