Comments on: Joni Sensel http://www.darcypattison.com/authors/joni-sensel/ Sat, 11 Feb 2012 15:30:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 By: Vivian http://www.darcypattison.com/authors/joni-sensel/comment-page-1/#comment-2684 Vivian Mon, 09 Mar 2009 20:40:38 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1299#comment-2684 Laini's sending all of us here! Great advice. Thank you! Laini’s sending all of us here! Great advice. Thank you!

]]> By: Barbara Parker http://www.darcypattison.com/authors/joni-sensel/comment-page-1/#comment-2682 Barbara Parker Mon, 09 Mar 2009 19:34:18 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1299#comment-2682 Great ideas. Thanks Great ideas. Thanks

]]> By: tanita http://www.darcypattison.com/authors/joni-sensel/comment-page-1/#comment-2679 tanita Mon, 09 Mar 2009 14:41:28 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1299#comment-2679 Laini sent me over, too -- this is great advice, and I'm sort of gobsmacked Joni had to cut SO MANY words, but she really made it work. Wow. Laini sent me over, too — this is great advice, and I’m sort of gobsmacked Joni had to cut SO MANY words, but she really made it work. Wow.

]]> By: Stephanie Perkins http://www.darcypattison.com/authors/joni-sensel/comment-page-1/#comment-2494 Stephanie Perkins Thu, 05 Mar 2009 16:29:33 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1299#comment-2494 Hi Joni! Laini sent me the link here. What <i>fantastic</i> advice -- several things I've never thought about before. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU! Hi Joni! Laini sent me the link here. What fantastic advice — several things I’ve never thought about before. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!

]]> By: Laini Taylor http://www.darcypattison.com/authors/joni-sensel/comment-page-1/#comment-2477 Laini Taylor Thu, 05 Mar 2009 04:38:04 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1299#comment-2477 Oh, this is all AWESOME advice, Joni. I'm so happy to read it right now, as I fear my w.i.p. wants to be two books when I just want it to be one! I cut a ton of words out of my last book, and learned some ruthlessness, but these are some great tips I haven't really thought of. AND I started reading Farwalker's Quest last night and I love it so far! Can't wait to be done working tonight so I can read :-) Oh, this is all AWESOME advice, Joni. I’m so happy to read it right now, as I fear my w.i.p. wants to be two books when I just want it to be one! I cut a ton of words out of my last book, and learned some ruthlessness, but these are some great tips I haven’t really thought of.

AND I started reading Farwalker’s Quest last night and I love it so far! Can’t wait to be done working tonight so I can read :-)

]]> By: StoryForce http://www.darcypattison.com/authors/joni-sensel/comment-page-1/#comment-2318 StoryForce Sun, 01 Mar 2009 00:15:02 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1299#comment-2318 Joni- I am so happy to hear the advice that an author doesn't always have to "show don't tell". If everything thing in the manuscript is a scene...there turns out to be lots that can be cut. Thanks! Joni-
I am so happy to hear the advice that an author doesn’t always have to “show don’t tell”. If everything thing in the manuscript is a scene…there turns out to be lots that can be cut. Thanks!

]]> By: Mary http://www.darcypattison.com/authors/joni-sensel/comment-page-1/#comment-2317 Mary Sun, 01 Mar 2009 00:09:46 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1299#comment-2317 Great advice, Joni! Great advice, Joni!

]]> By: Helen Landalf http://www.darcypattison.com/authors/joni-sensel/comment-page-1/#comment-2287 Helen Landalf Fri, 27 Feb 2009 21:37:57 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1299#comment-2287 Thanks for the excellent advice. Perfect timing, as I'm in the middle of a novel revision right now! Thanks for the excellent advice. Perfect timing, as I’m in the middle of a novel revision right now!

]]> By: Susan Marlow http://www.darcypattison.com/authors/joni-sensel/comment-page-1/#comment-2285 Susan Marlow Fri, 27 Feb 2009 17:40:45 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1299#comment-2285 This was GREAT! Thanks for sharing, Joni. The one I liked best was "It's OK to tell." I so agree with your editors. Balance, authors. We need balance. This was GREAT! Thanks for sharing, Joni. The one I liked best was “It’s OK to tell.” I so agree with your editors. Balance, authors. We need balance.

]]> By: New books « Wagging Tales http://www.darcypattison.com/authors/joni-sensel/comment-page-1/#comment-2191 New books « Wagging Tales Mon, 23 Feb 2009 23:51:06 +0000 http://www.darcypattison.com/?p=1299#comment-2191 [...] 23, 2009 in Books, Kid Lit, Me, writers Joni Sensel is giving good revision advice as a guest blogger over at Darcy Pattison’s blog. [...] [...] 23, 2009 in Books, Kid Lit, Me, writers Joni Sensel is giving good revision advice as a guest blogger over at Darcy Pattison’s blog. [...]

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