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	<title>Comments on: Cheryl Renee Herbsman: 2k9</title>
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		<title>By: S. Terrell French</title>
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		<dc:creator>S. Terrell French</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Apr 2009 12:58:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think your story will help authors realize that revision is a balancing act and a conversation between a writer and an editor!  Can&#039;t wait to read the book!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think your story will help authors realize that revision is a balancing act and a conversation between a writer and an editor!  Can&#8217;t wait to read the book!</p>
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		<title>By: Deborah Lytton</title>
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		<dc:creator>Deborah Lytton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Apr 2009 05:12:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Cheryl,

I think your approach is empowering.  So glad you maintained your own vision for the book--and you still made your editor happy.  Incredible!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cheryl,</p>
<p>I think your approach is empowering.  So glad you maintained your own vision for the book&#8211;and you still made your editor happy.  Incredible!</p>
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		<title>By: Rosanne</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosanne</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Apr 2009 14:22:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m so glad you shared your experience. Putting myself in an editors shoes I&#039;d be nervous if my author slavishly did everything I suggested without reflecting on the overall vision of the story. Good for you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m so glad you shared your experience. Putting myself in an editors shoes I&#8217;d be nervous if my author slavishly did everything I suggested without reflecting on the overall vision of the story. Good for you!</p>
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		<title>By: Edie Hemingway</title>
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		<dc:creator>Edie Hemingway</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Apr 2009 13:34:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Cheryl,
I love the fact that you can listen to an editor (or agent) and make the revisions that will improve the story, yet still stick to your guns about your own vision for what is best.  And, even better, your editor respects you for it!  Great article.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cheryl,<br />
I love the fact that you can listen to an editor (or agent) and make the revisions that will improve the story, yet still stick to your guns about your own vision for what is best.  And, even better, your editor respects you for it!  Great article.</p>
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